No ripple
Circled the scaled,
Unblinking wedge
Surfacing in dark water.
She tasted the hissing air
Towards her sunlit dock
Where I sat,
Before sinking again
Into the brown,
Silken sweetness
Of the summer bayou.
No ripple
Circled the scaled,
Unblinking wedge
Surfacing in dark water.
She tasted the hissing air
Towards her sunlit dock
Where I sat,
Before sinking again
Into the brown,
Silken sweetness
Of the summer bayou.
One response to “August Sibilance”
I love this – your use of sensory language creates an immersive experience, I feel the warmth and tranquillity of the summer bayou❤️
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